It looks a little too chaotic for me. (with all the reflection). Also, it's just a c4d at the moment, make sure you turn it in something nice!

sorry but i'm gonna be honest you use way too many reflections [ shadows of texts ] and i rated 1 star , also it gives a feeling that you haven't done much you like just took a picture and placed it try to make one with your own personal created background [ brushes ......] and all that crap.

i have a little pm for you dvise.

i edited the post

Coff... [UNFINISHED] means unfinished signature.
Anyways:

Make reflections more opaque first of all, then you could try to change the font color to something more fitting.
I can suggest even to duplicate the background layer and try one of the photoshop filters, if you don't want to mix brushes etc, then blend both (play with this tricks, it's always funny )

I don't like a lot abstract subjects, but this looks nice.
I won't rate till it's finished